Score: 5

"Very good start"

submission: Make A Cartoon Face V 1.5

date: August 16, 2009

I remember when i first made this...
Yep...
This is a good one, but a common mistake on dress ups is making "line" mouths...
They are Really hard to click on, so that makes it anoying...
Try this...
In the mouth clip, create a new layer, and with the brush set big enough...
Draw a line over the mouth...
As if you were copying it...
Now select the brushed vector, and in color, set the alpha to 0%...
That way it will be the same mouth, but with a wider "click.area"...
If i didn't explained it well, just PM me and i'd be glad to help you...
Congrats...
Very good start...

Score: 8

"Just fine"

submission: Word Shoot!

date: August 12, 2009

It is good...
The way you get the letters... yes... it's annoying, and it makes me feel i don't want to play it for long...
But most important thing...
Main Menu looks awesome...
I don't know if it's my computer, but this makes it a bit slow, and it's the very first game here in newgrounds that gets to do it...
I think it might be because of the Glow filters on the letters...
Try using just a white outline, that way more people will be able to play it...
Needs a pause menu...
So we are able to restart the game...

There's a little mistake you made:
Depth makes it feel awesome when moving, but some of the smaller ones pass over the bigger ones, as if they were closer than those...

It's a very good flash work anyways...

Score: 9

"Nice"

submission: Guitar Tuner

date: August 12, 2009

Yeah, some people don't have a tuner in home so they'll be messing up when tunning the guitar...
Also the download option makes it more useful, as it might be carried around in an USB o something...
An option that plays all the notes in order would be great...
Very nice, i loved the simple design, specially the wood...
One thing i'd add is a configurable metronome...
It could work for many people...
At least for some kids i know that are just starting to learn guitar...
Maybe using intervals? *wink*
Haha...
This covers everything needed to tune a guitar...
So that's great, right?

To PaleWhiteNinja:
It's not a game it's a tool, and a very good one...
It is taken by a game because there is no "gadget" section on newgrounds...