Score: 5

"Very good start"

submission: Make A Cartoon Face V 1.5

date: August 16, 2009

I remember when i first made this...
Yep...
This is a good one, but a common mistake on dress ups is making "line" mouths...
They are Really hard to click on, so that makes it anoying...
Try this...
In the mouth clip, create a new layer, and with the brush set big enough...
Draw a line over the mouth...
As if you were copying it...
Now select the brushed vector, and in color, set the alpha to 0%...
That way it will be the same mouth, but with a wider "click.area"...
If i didn't explained it well, just PM me and i'd be glad to help you...
Congrats...
Very good start...

Score: 8

"Just fine"

submission: Word Shoot!

date: August 12, 2009

It is good...
The way you get the letters... yes... it's annoying, and it makes me feel i don't want to play it for long...
But most important thing...
Main Menu looks awesome...
I don't know if it's my computer, but this makes it a bit slow, and it's the very first game here in newgrounds that gets to do it...
I think it might be because of the Glow filters on the letters...
Try using just a white outline, that way more people will be able to play it...
Needs a pause menu...
So we are able to restart the game...

There's a little mistake you made:
Depth makes it feel awesome when moving, but some of the smaller ones pass over the bigger ones, as if they were closer than those...

It's a very good flash work anyways...

Score: 9

"Nice"

submission: Guitar Tuner

date: August 12, 2009

Yeah, some people don't have a tuner in home so they'll be messing up when tunning the guitar...
Also the download option makes it more useful, as it might be carried around in an USB o something...
An option that plays all the notes in order would be great...
Very nice, i loved the simple design, specially the wood...
One thing i'd add is a configurable metronome...
It could work for many people...
At least for some kids i know that are just starting to learn guitar...
Maybe using intervals? *wink*
Haha...
This covers everything needed to tune a guitar...
So that's great, right?

To PaleWhiteNinja:
It's not a game it's a tool, and a very good one...
It is taken by a game because there is no "gadget" section on newgrounds...

Score: 8

"Is it me?..."

submission: Laser Dodge

date: August 1, 2009

Or when you choose the normal/medium difficulty level it only says "difficulty-" and there is no normal/medium label?...

It's a very good concept, and it is correctly handled...
There were some things i felt they were missing to become a game, but as a mini-game it is awesome...

Try making a better Main Menu design, and use a different font on buttons...
It will make your game feel more proffesional...

Congrats...

Score: 10

"Relixo"

submission: When Pigs Fly

date: July 29, 2009

The "Reach the beginning" medal is just once you've finicshed the game...
Well i think this is a VERY simple game, we have seen lots like this, but they were "don't touch the walls" games...
This one changed everything making ONLY the wings vilnerable, so it feels really different...
I loved the pixel art, not because it always rulez, but because of the simplicity of the game combined with pixel art covers it with an wesome feeling...

I'd like an "exploring" mode, with more than just one way to go...
Like getting to the atlantis if going through water tunels...
Or to the center of the earth if going downwards...
Also some treasures to find and unlock medals with them or something...

Haha...
I know i'm asking for too much but i really think this game would become (more) awesome if adding more stuff...

Congrats...

Score: 10

"Excelent"

submission: Wizard Defense

date: July 25, 2009

This one has a very good style...
It's just like an usual defense game, but in this you got to aim...
So... It gets more dynamic as i see...
I woudln't add anything else, it has a great design on the menu...
Only thing i didn't like is that the king kong's looked a bit strange when they were walking left or right...
Also adding some "objects" that would blow up, if you shoot them...
Something like the "worms"game barrels...

Its a very good job...
Congrats...

Score: 6

"Some tips"

submission: Pogo Penguin

date: July 25, 2009

1) Try registering the Y position of the penguin instead of the colision with the floor, that way it will never fall through it...

2) Add a little spin in the penguin when it moves...

3)add something like, if you dont press up, the penguin jumps low, but it moves fast... If you press it... I jumps very high, but with less speed...

It works great for me...
But needs improvements...

Score: 10

"Very very good"

submission: Dumbass Luigi

date: July 24, 2009

Only thing i would add...
Is a scene select menú...
But animation was graceful...
congrats...

Score: 10

"It was all awesome..."

submission: Ladybug

date: July 21, 2009

Music is perfect for a game like this...
It might need something like a "special ladybug" that if you clear it, the chain points multiplies...
a x2 ladybug... Or something like that...
And a "smaller bubble" and "bigger bubble" one... If you're making a big chain...
It might resize your bubble...

That's in my opinion...
Having too much power ups would make it loose the simplicity, so just 2 or 3 would do great...

Good Job...

Score: 10

"Original"

submission: Party Boat

date: July 14, 2009

Very very original...
Atari-like Graphics gives it a great arcade-style...
Sound Effects were very good too...
Choosing the loop as a score multiplier is a great choice...
i'd love it if it had a collect-mode...
Collecting coins...
While the misile chases you...
Something like that...
Yeah...
Just make sure that the Dinamic Texts from the flash are unselectable...
That way it will feel of more quality...
That's the only bad thing i found...
Everything else is great...
Congrats...